Punished

Punished

Prim Natalia Cooper lives life on the straight and narrow, never veering into naughty territory. But she wants to. One night, years ago, her boyfriend gave her a few swats on the rear as part of their sex play and she loved it. She wants more. But he’s long gone and she hasn’t been spanked since. When she learns of a club where she can get exactly what she needs—anonymousl...

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Title:Punished
Author:Brynn Paulin
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Edition Language:English

Punished Reviews

  • Future Slayer Girl

    Oh my holy hotness, batman!

    Seriously, how in the world have I not come across Brynn Paulin before? That was the hottest DD/spanking book I have ever read in my LIFE! For such a short story it made me hot, made me cry, made me happy, AND made HOT! Oh, wait, I said that already!

    Not only does Brynn write VERY well, she has a very unique understand behind the BDSM lifestyle. Not just bondage, floggers, and collars, oh my! But she's taking a dive into all the different degrees of the lifestyle. I ca

    Oh my holy hotness, batman!

    Seriously, how in the world have I not come across Brynn Paulin before? That was the hottest DD/spanking book I have ever read in my LIFE! For such a short story it made me hot, made me cry, made me happy, AND made HOT! Oh, wait, I said that already!

    Not only does Brynn write VERY well, she has a very unique understand behind the BDSM lifestyle. Not just bondage, floggers, and collars, oh my! But she's taking a dive into all the different degrees of the lifestyle. I can so respect that. Lordy Ms. Brynn you have made yourself an insta buy with me!

  • Holly

    This was a naughty little book *giggles* - just the way I like 'em!! Fairly short and sweet with light BDSM, specifically spanking, if you hadn't figured that out from the cover :) Sexy, dominant male, sweet submissive female and lots of hot sex, right up my ally!!

  • Sans

    Wow. That was pretty hot. Too bad I don't work for that guy. But ick. The idea of hooking up with anyone I work for is not a pleasant prospect. Anyway. Short read, very steamy, straightforward M/s spanking fetish.

    As usual, there's a HEA, so this is on the romantic side of erotic writing. As such, there is also the obligatory Big Misunderstanding that quickly gets resolved in a manner satisfactory to both parties involved. I didn't think girlfriend was very smart in her decision that led to the

    Wow. That was pretty hot. Too bad I don't work for that guy. But ick. The idea of hooking up with anyone I work for is not a pleasant prospect. Anyway. Short read, very steamy, straightforward M/s spanking fetish.

    As usual, there's a HEA, so this is on the romantic side of erotic writing. As such, there is also the obligatory Big Misunderstanding that quickly gets resolved in a manner satisfactory to both parties involved. I didn't think girlfriend was very smart in her decision that led to the Big Mis, but hey, that's why the hero is there to put her back on the path to submission.

  • Jo * Smut-Dickted *

    Although this is VERY short it's quite entertaining. It starts right off with a bang (or should I say SMACK! LOL) and doesn't really let up at all. Anyone who has had a work fantasy of the boss or another good looking guy in the office - well here's your book. The "Punished" scenes are very well written - but then Brynn Paulin does BDSM scenes like this exceptionally well. If you're in the mood for a little short sometin-sometim well give this one a go!

  • Emily

    Natalia Cooper decides the only way to get rid of her sexual tension is to try out The Dungeon, a club that caters to scenes and only takes it as far you request. Having tried spanking once before, she wants to try again but this time with a stranger who enacts the scene, with both parties having masks on she knows she does not run the chance of seeing the man giving her the spankings again.

    Ethan Tavish knows the instant he walks in the door that the woman is his secretary Natalia, who he has wa

    Natalia Cooper decides the only way to get rid of her sexual tension is to try out The Dungeon, a club that caters to scenes and only takes it as far you request. Having tried spanking once before, she wants to try again but this time with a stranger who enacts the scene, with both parties having masks on she knows she does not run the chance of seeing the man giving her the spankings again.

    Ethan Tavish knows the instant he walks in the door that the woman is his secretary Natalia, who he has wanted for a long time but was never willing to cross the professional barrier. Now that he knows what is hidden past the demure secretary he plans to make her his.

    Great read, very quickly paced. I think the only thing I would have wished was for it to be a bit longer and more character depth. 3.75

  • Raine

    Not too bad, but I'm not sure I will read the next in the series. Not sure why I bought this book for $2.99!!!

  • ♆ BookAddict  ✒ La Crimson Femme

    This is a hard review for me. I am generally a fan of Ms. Paulin. I also like to support authors in the state I live in. This book was just okay for me. The scenes progressed too fast and in an unlikely manner for me to believe. I'm not arguing that women and men hook up so quickly. What made it not as believable for me is the way these characters were described. For these types of personality, I would not anticipate such fast copulation. Nor would I expect the breach of manager to subordinate s

    This is a hard review for me. I am generally a fan of Ms. Paulin. I also like to support authors in the state I live in. This book was just okay for me. The scenes progressed too fast and in an unlikely manner for me to believe. I'm not arguing that women and men hook up so quickly. What made it not as believable for me is the way these characters were described. For these types of personality, I would not anticipate such fast copulation. Nor would I expect the breach of manager to subordinate so quickly.

    What really put me ill at ease was the lack of discretion and confrontation of identity in the public life. One of the cardinal rules is not to out a person outside of the scene. Yes, I understand they were alone together when he outed her. However, I found this to be discomforting because a Dom who is so well versed as he was supposed to be, should have known better. If I had been in Natalia's place, even if I was crushing on Ethan, what he did would have been a breach of trust. The fact that it took place in a work place during work hours also rubbed me the wrong way.

    Since it is a slice of life/contemporary story, I felt ill at ease within two chapters of the book. This is not to say that the writer needs to be a teacher of correct BDSM protocol. It's just saying from a person who values anonymity to a degree to ensure no lost of job or issues with families, this hit a hot button for me.

    As a sexy fantasy story, it is a hot little number. The happily ever after was sweet if predictable.

  •  Sara

    Just didn't do it for me. I dislike stories where the main characters don't realize they already know one another; feels like a violation of the trust that's such a big pat of a D/s relationship. But if you're into hot spanking featuring boss/employee, i'd recommend this.

  • Catherine

    This erotic short story was like the literary equivalent of a woman faking an orgasm. It had all the appearances of the real thing - student/teacher role play, an illicit employee/boss relationship, BDSM kink, and a sexy leading man - without any of the delicious fireworks at the end.

    It is possible I’m just being picky. After all, the story

    have its supremely sexy moments (I don’t know any woman who’s immune to a powerful man telling her to drop her panties and bend over a desk), but in the

    This erotic short story was like the literary equivalent of a woman faking an orgasm. It had all the appearances of the real thing - student/teacher role play, an illicit employee/boss relationship, BDSM kink, and a sexy leading man - without any of the delicious fireworks at the end.

    It is possible I’m just being picky. After all, the story

    have its supremely sexy moments (I don’t know any woman who’s immune to a powerful man telling her to drop her panties and bend over a desk), but in the end I was left feeling… blah.

    One of the things that killed the story for me was the dialogue. There were a lot of variations of the breathy, “spank me, Sir. I’ve been a bad, bad girl,” and the whole thing came off sounding like the script for a super cheesy skin flick (I laughed on more than one occasion, and I’m fairly certain that wasn’t the reaction the author was hoping to elicit from her readers). Even so, I probably could’ve forgiven the over-the-top dialogue during the role play scenes because in a weird way it kind of fits there (chances are I’d sound equally ridiculous in similar circumstances), but Paulin made the mistake of trying to combine this type of generic role play with a character who was a legitimate (if

    ) member of the BDSM community. To me, those robotic and decidedly unsexy phrases come across as completely insincere and, as far as I know, no Dom worth his salt puts up with a sub that lies to him. So… dialogue fail.

    And then there was the nearly instantaneous I-will-love-you-until-my-dying-breath-please-marry-me-and-stay-with-me-forever-and-ever-and-ever shtick that drives me crazy when it’s written to appease expectations rather than coming from any tangible feeling between the characters. Why do authors feel the need to reach for a nauseatingly flawless happy ending? Why can’t two hot people just be attracted to each other and go at it like rabbits for a while without pledging their undying love?! I mean… this isn’t the Titanic and they haven’t missed the last lifeboat. STOP RUSHING THEM!

    Verdict: I’d pass on it if I were you; the sex scenes aren’t enough to make up for the bad… well… everything else.

  • Evey

    The romance between the main characters was that much ridiculous and rushed out I had to roll my eyes and laugh like a child. But internally, because I read this at 3am.

    Basic storyline, some steamy scenes and cardboard cutouts as protagonists... Nothing new.

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